by anglosextantyen4u
I was enjoying the read until I got to the last two stanzas where there seems to be words missing for it to make sense .... maybe a 'what' between 'from earlier'?
'Herself if she really is,
by anything.' lost me completely
because wasn't expecting much. Never seen your stuff before, but I like the thoughts and the way this is done. The ending made me create a meaning because it is so strange.