by wakingDown
My sweet, sweet friend; In the eyes of "them", they would never see you as a rusted chain. You are brilliant! And, I think you have a great sense of humor and even when you are "dark" you are still my light! *heartya! *
......and moving. You convey your situation and the emotions it brings well. Love heals if we let it.
and express the emotions strong. the idea of a rusted chain adds weight, strength and corrosion to the piece, which is reflected within
Is their albatross
What depth of emotion : excellence in verse !
Very deep, strikes me as a piece about love and commitment, perhaps familial?