by ramonathompson
And you know what? I bet if you had a chance to read it, a -la stand up - live, majority of readers here would like it too. So what's the problem you may ask? I suspect (because I haven't asked) that given your style -which is straight and simple and does not try to "sell" more than it says, many are - let me whisper it to you: simply shy! Yes too shy to admit in public at least that something, written in such simple, even un refined words could actually give them some true fun. So they can't make the distinction between style and content; words and emotions; and what's on the surface and what lies beneath - raw and true for you and for many, other than you. Let it be and let it pass, it seems to me that you keep it on! I have one condition though; PLEASE leave alone that guy from the rock competition you were so enamoured with in your poems! He could never sing one line, let alone a whole song!
Be well and be free and keep being you!