All Comments on 'Scratching Verse'

Well, I posted with an editing error. In line 15 "glorious beauty" should read "glorious splendor". I don't know how I missed it but I did. I have sent a corrected edited version but I guess it takes a little time for things to get fixed so I am putting this note here. I hate it when I do things like that as I do try to be careful. Oh well, I am human!

There are only two perfect writers around here.

Me, and you, and we are all watching you...lol.. But then I type about 30 WPM without error and at 36 WPM it becomes 100% error!

I enjoyed this, it gave me a vision of someone standing on a stage in a dark night club reciting it. Not sure if that was the intent but if it was, you nailed it!

Thanks,

MGM

what happened to my comment--arghhhh! This is a good romp of a muses playing, drifting in and out of the process of creation.

Five.

Good stuff Koba. It's a great idea, well executed. Despite the previous comments, there are no perfect writers and believing you are such will inhibit your growth.