All Comments on 'Seeking'

by tolyk

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ferociouskittycatferociouskittycatover 19 years ago
so beautiful

A true romantic.

Loved it tolyk!! ;-)

EmeraldKittenEmeraldKittenover 19 years ago
Good job!

I really enjoyed it. :)

Makes me want to sigh in contentment. ;)

I expect to see more of these soon!

1sexylady1sexyladyover 19 years ago
Nicely done

Very romantic and I like that.

BelegonBelegonover 19 years ago
Unapologetically romantic...

and that is not a bad thing. Very optomistic as well, I have the feeling that the poet is looking forward.

"Following where my heart leads.

Hoping the destination is you."

There is a line between them that fits well within the poem, but I like these two enough to look at them by themself. Nice phrase.

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
I just realized I hadn't come and commented

I think Belegon said it best. I love those two lines as well.

(Thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

sacksackover 19 years ago
Now I wish I was in love....

Your writing is so vivid and infectious! Bravo!

logophilelogophileabout 19 years ago
Thank you...

for sharing these lovely words. Melting...

Dar~Dar~about 19 years ago
Sweet

I like the way you choose your words. Thank you.

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Outstanding!

Gives me faith that a kind of love such as this can still exist.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Such

languid, loving dreams! There's so much longing in here. Beautiful work! Thank you. LJ

angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Powerful

Wonderful expression of your hopes, dreams and desires. Well done, Tol. ~Minx

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