All Comments on 'Seeking'

Wonderful expression of your hopes, dreams and desires. Well done, Tol. ~Minx

languid, loving dreams! There's so much longing in here. Beautiful work! Thank you. LJ

Gives me faith that a kind of love such as this can still exist.

I like the way you choose your words. Thank you.

for sharing these lovely words. Melting...

Your writing is so vivid and infectious! Bravo!

I think Belegon said it best. I love those two lines as well.

(Thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

and that is not a bad thing. Very optomistic as well, I have the feeling that the poet is looking forward.

"Following where my heart leads.

Hoping the destination is you."

There is a line between them that fits well within the poem, but I like these two enough to look at them by themself. Nice phrase.

Very romantic and I like that.

I really enjoyed it. :)

Makes me want to sigh in contentment. ;)

I expect to see more of these soon!

A true romantic.

Loved it tolyk!! ;-)