All Comments on 'Shadows and Flames'

Interesting thoughts on an impossible situation, makes you wonder(or that could just be me, heh). I really like "No longer can it warm, only make the shadows dance". ~Merry

This reads more like a letter than a poem until the last stanza.

More of an explanation than a "showing" of what you mean.

You might have a stronger piece if you just kept the last stanza,

and worked on making it stand alone.

You have some nice imagery there.