All Comments on 'Shadows and Flames'

This reads more like a letter than a poem until the last stanza.

More of an explanation than a "showing" of what you mean.

You might have a stronger piece if you just kept the last stanza,

and worked on making it stand alone.

You have some nice imagery there.

Interesting thoughts on an impossible situation, makes you wonder(or that could just be me, heh). I really like "No longer can it warm, only make the shadows dance". ~Merry