by swallowedscream
But do you know what makes it so good? You may wish to Google the term "conceit" as related to poetry. I can't decide whether the comparisons are metaphors, conceits, or similes; but whatever they are, they are elegant. (I would scratch the word "just," since the very next word means essentially the same thing.) Great stuff!
But the benefits were all mine! Someone who writes poems which sound both modern and classic at the same time and to top it all they can be fun and of course romantic as in here (I came back from reading again the hilarious "flu shmu"...).