- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Simple
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Nothing simple about love, or maybe
Nothing to love is simple.
Never having to feel the melancholy of love lost,
or
Never having to get passed jitters, shivers, quivers, or any other 'ers...just saying...
Being in love or the idea of being in love...
is, love... Simple enough right?
A broken heart split into multipurpose fragments
of, fear, hate, abandonment and finally love?
Simple right?
Having no one to reciprocate a feeling of... lost without, sleeplessness, thinking about, caring or sharing one's self. Simple?
Truth is love is everything except simple. No on can explain the " why did I stay after he did this or she did that "
However we can explain how we feel. Happy, mad, sad, disappointed, lost, insecure, unsure, even heartbroken from...Love.
Love is give. Love is take. Love is sad. Love is magic. Love is lost.
BUT
Love is never simple, and having nothing or no one to love is... Death
- COMMENTS
JWrenabout 9 years agoFeel this is more about love lost than having love. Whatever, it's a thoughtful piece, meandering through the myriad of problems and feelings that affect us all. As for the final line - well, never forget to love thyself!
wakingDownover 10 years agoThe sense of wandering was, for me, an excellent format for the feeling out of the aspects of love. I like that this is a calm and steady trip with that little hook at the end. I would like to see more like this.
erectus123over 10 years agoas for death being the alternative, believe me there are a lot a lovely people to love, no one is irreplaceable and love can be simple, and that's the sweetest kind as all the emotional problems (i.e. baggage) do not exist in every object of affection.
Note- there is a dif between being loved and loving; like intercourse, it works best when both cum together
GuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago..I saw... I voted. As todski said it rambled and so did my attention. You have an original eye, avoid cliches and keep writing.
