All Comments on 'Simple'

Like hashing out you own thoughts, it was almost like we were having a conversation and I was nodding as your questions came up "love" it. gave it a five coz you engaged me as a reader. I think this was a clever little piece in the wording, phrasing and writing.

with Tod, he frightens me - 5ed

Despite the fact that it starts out on four negations, and shifts nicely, I feel that it will be overlooked, as the beginning doesn't have a "grabber", it looks something not worth reading, suffuse with words like "Love", standard cliches, I'm not saying what you did is wrong, everything is played more or less right, just a precaution.

Complex !

..I saw... I voted. As todski said it rambled and so did my attention. You have an original eye, avoid cliches and keep writing.

as for death being the alternative, believe me there are a lot a lovely people to love, no one is irreplaceable and love can be simple, and that's the sweetest kind as all the emotional problems (i.e. baggage) do not exist in every object of affection.

Note- there is a dif between being loved and loving; like intercourse, it works best when both cum together

The sense of wandering was, for me, an excellent format for the feeling out of the aspects of love. I like that this is a calm and steady trip with that little hook at the end. I would like to see more like this.

Feel this is more about love lost than having love. Whatever, it's a thoughtful piece, meandering through the myriad of problems and feelings that affect us all. As for the final line - well, never forget to love thyself!