All Comments on 'Sin du jour'

~tell them all of how

I set my sin's on a silver platter

before you for your choosing.

of my torrid tones

and wicked pace.~

is, for lack of a better word, yummy.

very nice work as always

Sexy/sinister, lovely ending. One or two wobbles with spelling & punctuation/caps consistency.Darkened sins.

This was a decadently dark, sex sinful piece, Sabina! And as a decadently dark {not dark as in, "demon" - just dark as in, "brunette"} sex sinful Domme, I might have to use something like this as a clause in a slavery contract for potential submissives <wink> Wicked warnings of a SINister feel throughout. Great work!

I think that's what the snake did was lure deviate motives and stir the dark side of the soul <hehehey!> cute title

delicious!

Very sexy we all have a darker side. Do you need the apostrophe in sins?

That's a great piece. Tight, efficient, sexy and vivid. There's a nice sense of wham in the last four lines that hits hard without feeling like a punchline. Excellent work.