All Comments on 'Sleepless Ramble'

...who can you trust? His dereliction of duty cracked me up! Wonderful poem, Merry!

Very erotic, and very controlled. Loved it!

and provacative for sure...leaves you will a youthful chuckle....smiling/blue

could be high school make out memories or a modern day tryst.

Leaves just enough unsaid to make the reader work a little.

loved the phrase " full moon resolve"

Nice work

Thank you

I smile as I read, delightful.

in this very erotic poem. I loved the five finger logic on naugahyde and the pine-scent failure. I think perhaps drop the apostrophe on sentinel and I wondered if "lead" wanted to be "leads" following your "Search for oblivion." Either way it's a unique, realistically sexy poem. Well done.

jim : )