All Comments on 'Slow Fall From A Shudder'

in poetry can create perpetual challenge. It is easy to get jaded after so many. But this one works well for my taste. I felt the opening might lead to disappointment but instead it held me just enough and then got better, especially the Pollock part. Will be recommended when I get around to fixing up today's Poem/Poetry review sometime later this afternoon or evening.

I like it but I had to read it a few times. The poem does build up in an odd round about way like an orgasm. I guess thats the slow fall part. The more I think about it the more erotic it becomes.

I have nothing constructive to say, I just wanted to let you know I read it and enjoyed it, several times. keep up the good work.

~ maria