by DocktorWu
I have nothing constructive to say, I just wanted to let you know I read it and enjoyed it, several times. keep up the good work.
~ maria
I like it but I had to read it a few times. The poem does build up in an odd round about way like an orgasm. I guess thats the slow fall part. The more I think about it the more erotic it becomes.
in poetry can create perpetual challenge. It is easy to get jaded after so many. But this one works well for my taste. I felt the opening might lead to disappointment but instead it held me just enough and then got better, especially the Pollock part. Will be recommended when I get around to fixing up today's Poem/Poetry review sometime later this afternoon or evening.