All Comments on 'so i can rest my elbow on her hip'

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Yeah

that " not drinking enough beer to get a buzz" headache sucks.

Never heard anyone else mention it.

I love the way this ends...with the lotion smell.

I like your stuff alot

Write on brother

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Oh, the things I've chewed...

"very slowly until

it doesn't taste

like anything but

dead animal"

I'm curious about the lines breaks, although it doesn't matter.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I like this poem. I like it a lot.

I don't like the line breaks. Stop with the choppy line breaks or I will bitch slap you, DA. lol

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