All Comments on 'Solace'

even the scenery changes the view. TK U MLJ LV NV

& then a rained out person stuck on the ground ....! Bravo , Demure , bravo ! a panoramic paint-brush worthy of a Hollywoodian canvas !

I like the subtle rhyme, which packs a nice punch of color and ends the poem on a hopeful note.

I might lose a few words that seem unnecessary to me and maybe avoid saying "line" more than once, but overall a strongly visual piece with a theme that's conveyed well. 5ed it. :-)

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tell go tell the sonnet guy what he did wrong, better he hear it from a beleiver