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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Continuing on in your jaded tradition; yawn, forced or real, tells of a bored outlook. Like saying <I>it's all so unreal and phony.</I>

AngelineAngelineabout 17 years ago
Pointless, but never boring

at least not to me. I've always enjoyed your laissez-faire wordplay and this poem is no exception. It's nice to see you writing here again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bravo.

I love your writing style, the events themelves, and the grit with which you describe it.

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