All Comments on 'Something Seductive in that State'

What a fantastically compact and potent poem. I enjoyed everything about it and am inclined to disagree with twelve (sorry) about the stanzas. I think the breaks are perfect- they add terrifically to the flow of the poem. It becomes the very thought you wanted to capture. Well done.

as a suggestion you should try stanza breaks, I don't ever remember you using them. See what happens.