All Comments on 'Sometimes cucumber'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Interesting metaphor. If you were a guy, I'd worry about you describing yourself as a cucumber.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
I like this...

you could strengthen it by losing some of the "extra" words, such as "soft", in the mushy insides line, as mushy implies softness anyway.

You have a good thing going and I would love to see you give it some more thought.

hugs to you

maria

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
pickle

Usually being thick skinned nothing is a bother. Occasionally someone comes along who ~ who rings my chimes ~ the wrong way.

Quiet mystical strength to this work. Comparison to a cucumber strengthens this rendering.

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