All Comments on 'Southern Song'

Your poem has been mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Can feel it well,

the envelopment of

seductive Southern heat ...

The peach would smell this,

and come running to read.. LOL,

if it is in the south,

or a breeze blowing from the south,

I want a sniff..

well done, a beautiful sweet southern

song, as red toes dip into puddles,

awaiting the next rain ..

to dance !

-sGp-