by live4passion
i like the word play here
with punctuation where one wouldnt expect it
i think the line breaks
well chosen
served as punctuation too
am i being too presumptive here
suggesting the d before your jungle
the phonetic equivalent of
the fun you may have had
with punctuation
or should I say
absence thereof
in as much as j
at the beginning of a sentence
in English has a d sound to it
i may be wrong
but i hope not
because i otherwise wasted a 5
No, not wasted greenmountaineer. Delightfully perceptive, and Very much so appreciated.