by Icingsugar
Well, not quite. Sorry - couldn't resist. I like this snappy little poem.
although reminiscent of adrian cronauer a la "goodmorning vietnam", you didn't reach me. Wasn't connected at all.
sorry, babe.
with spree 2, I was looking for the magic of spree and this one was not as good for me. Perhaps it was the anachronyms, but it didn't soar like spree did. I think without the comparison to spree, this might have stood better alone. Perhaps a different title would free this one some.