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by Druantia

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normal jeannormal jeanover 15 years ago
terrific!

With the title, I expected something totally different, however, what I got was such a pleasure to read. Well written, articulate and your line breaks work so well. I would mention one thing- you could have ended the poem and left off the last stanza and it would have packed SUCH a powerful punch. I liked it as is, but had that last line been-- <i>your heart, caged</i>. Well, that would have been a WOW moment. Good work, Dru, hope to see more from you.

all the best-

NJ

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