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by oregon_gal

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Ouch

Your language here is quite raw, you can feel emotion dripping off your words. Loved the contrast between the imagery and that ending was fab.

Neato

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
ouch

interesting and gripping read (~_~) step away but do not forget the coins, you may need them for a phone call <grin, I enjoyed your poem! Art~

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