All Comments on 'Steps to a fall'

in your work are interesting. I did find a couple of misspelled word- "benieth"----Melting benieth your fingertips. and "vunerable"--Vunerable and bare

One phrase i n particular caught my eye, I loved this-

<i>Kisses trail a blaze</i>

There is a lot to like in this work, but, it could use some more work. I would suggest dropping some gerunds and making the poem more active. Active poems engage the reader more so than passive ones. A bit more work on this and you will have a fine poem :)

Always use spell check, but sometimes, depending on the context, even spell check does not catch everything. Keep writing, that is the only way to improve!

enjoyed the read-

~ maria

ps, i did not vote because the poem feels unpolished and I did not want to be unfair.