All Comments on 'submissive origami'

Soars for me into the night ......!

Immortal lines , Tod :5-ed .

I feel you could lose this

"to ponder a moment

in origami silence."

while capitalizing on the unintended rhyme that emerges.

I'm not really fond of the title. It lacks the originality that the poem itself exudes.

Definitely a 5.