All Comments on 'Summer Of Discovery - The Poem'

...........I need to find your stories. I WAS fun - thanks.

I look forward to finding out about sexual empaths, an interesting concept.

In this poem you need to go back and pay some more attention to your rhyme scheme and your meter. If you intend to write a poem of structure, then how it sounds to the ear and feels to the tongue become quite important.

This poem was written to be FUN, for those readers of my story about the twins. It rhymes EXACTLY as I intended it to: 1/3 and 2/4. It reads well when "I" read it. Some verses have more syllables than others - so who cares.

Most poems I see here don't even rhyme at all! I suppose they would rate 1/2 of 1, ydd?

The rest of you, please enjoy it! I do.