All Comments on 'Sun on your back'

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DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
"Weeping..."

"...may endure for a night, but joy comes in the morning." Your poem somehow reminded me of this verse from the Bible. "Everything old is new again", and the seasons are renewed...therein lies hope! :)

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
HEY D.....THIS ONE IS GOOD SONG MATERIAL

listen to Neil Diamonds...Hot August Night.....this could be your break through to a musical career.....TK U MLJ LV NV

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 11 years ago
Clever as ever

Good rhyming and timing too. Sweet O.

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