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by Alex De Kok

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oggbashanoggbashanover 20 years ago
What is Poetry?

I liked the tone of this poem and the rhyme scheme.

I think you could have done more justice to your talents by forgetting rhyme and scansion. If you had written a very carefully composed and sparsely worded piece (as you can do) it would have counted as poetry.

Og

Writer of Doggerel

ChucksSiteChucksSiteabout 12 years ago
I Know Nothing of Poetry, but I Will Give You a "5" for Effort and Go On to Read the...

rest because I only have one more story to read from Alex, and I'm not read to move on to another author just yet.

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userAlex De Kok@Alex De Kok
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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...