Sweat

byNeonurotic©

-Read by Lilhi

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That one drop of lust could feed a famine
and I watch it, eyes slit, open-mouthed,
anticipating. The bead rolls down a
hard chest, a harder nipple where it's poised,
perpetually or so it seems.
The hang time is too tedious, starving
while waiting. I'm impatient.
One lick and it's a salty plenitude, albeit short-lived.

This dry spell really did last forever
and it's hot, I'll make him sweat a lot longer.



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by Trixareforkids05/08/14

Sorry one more thing.

The next to the last line doesn't quite fit. Since it sounds like she/he's in the process of ending the dry spell something like...

My/our dry spell had lasted too long.

Would work better.

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by Trixareforkids05/08/14

Text and audio didn't match up for me.

I liked the poem but the audio seemed too fast and unfeeling. I was expecting a slower sultry delivery to match the text and was therefore a bit jarred and put off by the audio.

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