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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
...in his sweet obsurity

An amazing line. When I get so absorbed in pleasuring my lover, her taste, her smell, her movements - yes that is how it is.

QueenelizabethQueenelizabethover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Your feedback is much appreciated.

oneiriaoneiriaover 10 years ago
Very nice.

I really liked this poem in terms of its brevity, its unusual imagery and use of language.

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