All Comments on 'Taking A Turn'

Heart -tugging pathos here , Pel is it an allusion to the " Anno d'amore" song or is there an autobiographical tit-bit ensconced in verse here ?

I liked this one a lot Pelegrino. For me it has the feel of a Cohen piece. There are stutters, the language is conversational, and for me it did a great job of conveying emotion. Simplistic and effective, very nicely done.

This is excellent stuff.

I think Trixie said it well. It does have a whimsical stutter and at the same is musical. Nicely done.