All Comments on 'Test Tube Daddy'

I didn't really LOVE it, but it isn't bad, but def not a 5, but to assure you I am not your one- bomber, here is a 5 from me. Good luck with your writing.

Such a tiny poem but it conveys so much sadness. The love and despair and longing shine through.

Concise and poignant. Loved it.

Bittersweet

This is a good poem and this part is great: orgasmic genetic similarities. I think the last line really detracts from the poem.