Thank You...You're Welcome

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wakingDown
wakingDown
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A taken chance, a shaking hand
Reaching into a vast unknown
A careful hello, a cautious greeting
     T
     H
     A
     N     Y
     K      O
             U
Wonder if you, what if I
Slowly learning more with time
Once I was, have you ever
     Y
     O     W
     U     E
     '       L
     R     C    
     E      O
            M
            E
Together we can, your dream will
A work that can be completed
A sprinkled comma, an endless revision

wakingDown
wakingDown
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SubbymaybeSubbymaybealmost 11 years ago
To my Marine...TY

This is perfect...just the way it is!!! B/c its mine! ;)

Luv it!!

I luv the format, I luv the feeling-meaning..... the real-life pages of sprinkled commas make me smile! So glad you replied!

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
some nice lines, novel attempt but I

don't think format really works as the good lines (i,.e.

"A sprinkled comma, an endless revision") stand up on their own