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by wakingDown
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erectus123almost 11 years agosome nice lines, novel attempt but I
don't think format really works as the good lines (i,.e.
"A sprinkled comma, an endless revision") stand up on their own
Subbymaybealmost 11 years agoTo my Marine...TY
This is perfect...just the way it is!!! B/c its mine! ;)
Luv it!!
I luv the format, I luv the feeling-meaning..... the real-life pages of sprinkled commas make me smile! So glad you replied!
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