All Comments on 'That Place'

I like where you're going with this poem. The whisp of feeling into a tangible reality is strong. I think a few of the phrases artistically bring into focus what you're trying to convey, but the ending could be tightend up a bit for better impact. It's not so much the last stanza that needs to be changed, but things seemed to take a strolling journey into an abrupt ending out of nowhere. I think a bit more teasing by building up the last couple stanzas would leave the reader a bit more fulfilled.