All Comments on 'The Blank Invitation'

Very good. I loved the word play in the first stanza, the knees streaming added a nice feel to the read. The only thing that bothered me was the extended line on your final rhyme. The compression of "beneath" and the extra syllables in the line gave an otherwise excellent rhyme pair (doubt/out) a forced feel. Beyond that, I thought this was an excellent poem. Well done.

jim :)