by My Erotic Trail
Interesting concept that could have been expressed in a more poetic manner but truely thought worthy.
It took me a moment to figure out pro-mos. I was wondering what a mos was. lol It's promos.
You don't use a semicolon after "by" and "dedicated to."
I agree with quasar about this needing to be more poetic, but I do think you have something to work with here.
getting sick of your "NOVEL" popularity already!!
good write...
~LB~
Kept me up all night, couldn't put it down.