All Comments on 'The Feel'

Very nice! For absolute certainty if my lover read me a poem like this I would be ready to go! I would be unstoppable! A 5 all the way for that reason alone! But I should add that it is very well written with very pleasant rhymess which make it even better. Nice erotic poetry!

your meter is all over the place, writing in rhyming couplets needs lines of the same length. Try reading it out loud to yourself and see where you stumble