All Comments on 'The Kings Men 2'

I take it this is part of a series about - dragons or something? The problem is that while you probably have a very clear vision of what is happening, it's difficult (at least I find it so) for the reader to understand. What is the bittersweet treat? Maybe I am being dense...

Desejo, The poems in this series are written to be vague enough that you can find many meanings depending on mood, and mindset while at the same time holding on to a slightly sensual feeling.

The bittersweet treat..... let's just say I think spitting is rude :)

zoyiab an admirable attempt, but you may be confusing a riddle in verse with poetry, there are no pointers or cues in place, there is not enough here so a reader may enjoy a mystery that remains a mystery at the end. i read it, refrained from commenting, not sure tazz got it

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