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YDDabout 20 years agoA lesson for mankind
Captivating and tight as usual.
One point, should "was what draw the line"
be either "draws" or "drew"?
jthserraabout 20 years agoAn interesting look into
the divine and those that look to it. I liked the wordplay and random rhyme here. The loose structure intimates a crumbling. Well done.
jim : )
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