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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
An interesting look into

the divine and those that look to it. I liked the wordplay and random rhyme here. The loose structure intimates a crumbling. Well done.

jim : )

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
A lesson for mankind

Captivating and tight as usual.

One point, should "was what draw the line"

be either "draws" or "drew"?

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