All Comments on 'The Offering'

This is a remarkable poem and Rhino's drawing accentuates the imagery so well. They compliment one another perfectly. Keep on writin'.

love the poem, the photo brings to mind his description of his island. Beautifully written, You are a natural talent.

A beautiful poem and a beautiful sentiment. Love it!

I love the way that the words and illustration enhance one another.

your words and Rhino's illustration take on a wonderful marriage! Great job..

~Honey

Both the poem and accompanying illustration nicely convey the enjoyment of fulfilling and anticipated consumption.

A wonderful poem that went with the drawing. It was an instant classic. This poem and drawing will stay wiyh me for a long time.

logo, this is wonderful! I love the imagery, even without rhinoguy's illustration. This poem, expanded, could have been a good story, but you kept it sparse, sharply worded, and oh-so-erotic! Nice job!

Rhinoguy's illustration provides the dessert. The poem ~ a sweet gift to the man she loves. Endearing and quite charming!

Sounds like the perfect offering, succulent and sweet.

I mean . . . Blimey!

for the receiver taking, TK U MLJ LV NV