All Comments on 'The One Who Saved Me'

and as you know I am disposed to like your poems, but I'm not sure I follow you completely in this one. "Black-winged at the bow" is really good, though. My problem is with the four concluding lines, which are good lines (meaning they are evocative), but I don't know what you're trying to say.

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I know, dimwit. But, hey. I'm a reader, y'know?