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imagining you in these places-somewhere

between wishing you more cushion

and glad for the remaining hardness that keeps you

coming back, solid

This is a real poem and it should be taken to the post office and officially stamped "poem" then shipped off to a publisher.

The words are strong yet sparse,

the images sharp,

but I am missing any more theme

thsn a night of looking out a window.

I really like these lines:

"except the romantic halo of yellow

puddles suggesting a scene

for coming July"

and july never came again for you

Long Live Literotica so I can visit you when I can