by MyZenTrail
and your sneaky "little" device- "peek" rather than peak, as in a mountain peak, was valuable to me, as a reader. I took a lot from this poem and I am sure I will read it again. In this line, I would lose the "the"-----(along the narrow ridges)
enjoyed the read-
~ m
p.s., I tried to vote, but my vote would not register, but it would have been a 5. I will try again later.