All Comments on 'The (Sexy) Night Before Christmas'

I needed this read this morning. Funny and erotic. I really enjoyed it. I'm just wondering that if you could've kept this to 12 syllables per lines how it really would've improved on the flow. Definitely worth reading. Thanks for the smile =)

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Oh this was fantastic, absolutely hilarious! Loved every line, it had me laughing out loud and has still left me smiling, very well done! Laughed my ass off!

Clever stuff, foehn. Well done. ~Imp