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by Shadow Angel
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LeBrozalmost 19 years agoA Bit Better
This verse much better than two others of yours I looked at today - "My Love" & "You Mean." Stronger imagery and nice transition from storm to passion. "Felt" a bit rough around the edges, but hey, it's all subjective.
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