by ElmerGlew
Twisty and concise and powerful. Shoulda got the other E today. :-)
And then you think, and well you should, when reading this thoughtful piece. Just look at what Chuck has wrought.
Didn't get an E???????????? Oh well, I need to check out more of your poems.
Who is the you? If it was me I wouldn't be thinking of finches. Is the you, you? Careful with the personal pronouns. It hinders here.